Cortana uses at LEAST four different kinds of blue.
Someone get that tentacle more varying shades of blue!
Mister Jay
over 10 years ago
I was going to make a Kekko Kamen joke but seems Jo is going to skip right to full nudity. Don't worry Jane. Jo would never post actual nudity with genitals and nipples here..... Thats what Rule 34 is for.
Phrozen
over 10 years ago
I would have liked to see a kill la kill cosplay :D
Meepo
over 10 years ago
Is this ever gonna go back to videogame comics? I'm getting real tired of this "Jo's Harem" stuff.
Cley Faye
over 10 years ago
You have my attention.
Bill's Beard Talking Here
over 10 years ago
I heard there's a Kill la Kill OVA coming soon, can't wait!
@Nerf NOW!!: In that case: "You're going to perform/do". Make sounds like she's just going to be used as a tool for cosplay (which might be the case, but I don't think it was intended). Or that she's gonna create the cosplay, which is certainly not true, considering the tentacle already has it.
[url=#user_comment_349140]@Jonah_Adams[/url]: Thanks. I'll not change the 1st part because you wear a costume, but you do a cosplay. Cosplay is an act, not the costume itself.
Jonah_Adams
over 10 years ago
Here's some proofreading for you! :3
Instead of "you're going to make" you could use "you're going to wear"
Put a comma after "gaming comic", replace "doesn't need do" with "don't have to" and instead of "this" use "that". Good comic tho
"Nerf Now!! is a gaming comic, so I don't need to wear this here" is probably a better way to phrase that. Also, "I don't like to admit [it], but." Keep up the good work!